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Today you are going to edit and improve your writing before writing out a final version in your neatest handwriting.  Work though the sentences on the powerpoint to correct and then up level by adding adjectives, adverbs, conjunctions as we do in class.


When you have edited and improved your writing with a different coloured pen or pencil, use the jungle paper to write your best version of the description.  Remember to write in pencil and write the school way, joining your letters carefully if you can.